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PostSubject: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 11:01 am

So...if it's not already obvious by my prolonged absence, I don't think I'll be returning to this rp. xD I know this will sound dumb, since it's kind of the whole point, but the story is just too...depressing for me. idk, it was honestly getting me down a bit.

HOWEVER.

I do love writing/reading books that are depressing in nature (which is why I find it ironic that I couldn't hack the rp). For a while now, I've been throwing this idea around in my head, and last night, I had...a dream. And if Stephenie Meyer is any example, if you have a dream about writing a book, you must follow it and make lots of money. Even if it's a horseshit story. (This one will not be, though.)

So yes, if you haven't caught the drift, I am thinking about turning WHE into a novel. XD

Just to warn you, the furthest I've ever gotten on writing a novel is several hundred pages; I've never finished one. :\ So I have little guarantee that this will ever be completed. On the other hand, if I can get some help mapping out the plot...that's always my biggest problem. xD

ALSO, THERE ARE QUITE A LOT OF IMPORTANT THINGS I HAVE TO POINT OUT, AND IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN BEING A PART OF THIS, I SUGGEST YOU READ ALL OF THE FOLLOWING:

1. THE GENERAL PLAN
The idea that I plan to follow is a story where every chapter focuses on one character, and all of the chapters end up tying in to the plot. Obviously, with this, there are a lot of issues concerning how many main characters there will be, who the story focuses on, etc, that I'll outline later.

2. HETALIA
...will be cut out completely. I always like to write with the idea that what I'm writing is going to be published, even if it probably won't be. So everything concerning Hetalia is going out. That means, yes, the idea of personified countries (no, this idea is not copyrighted, and has been used by other authors/artists, BUT let's not lie, it will automatically make one think of Hetalia). Instead, all of the characters will simply be from their respective countries/cities. I haven't worked out exactly how this will work around some character's backstories (because I know some of them are closely tied into the history of their country), but rest assured, I'll come up with something.

3. THE BALL
Although the story as a whole will be WHE-central, I'd like the ball to be the main event. Because it was one I was actually around for, and it brings all the characters together nicely. (Note to Admins: I don't know if it's just me, but I seem to be unable to look at older posts from Downtown, Uptown, and possibly other places I haven't checked. Obviously, this is kind of sort of a huge problem.) Also, I haven't come up with anything yet, but I really love Cinderella spin-offs, so...a ball presents the opportunity for that. If anyone has any ideas, I'd be glad to hear them. But I only want to do this if it can be very subtle; I don't want to force in a Cinderella plot unnecessarily.

4. WHICH CHARACTERS WILL BE USED?
THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT!! Most characters are not going to get a main role in the story! Even out of my own characters, the only person who for sure is getting his own chapter is Piter. The Godfather himself is potentially going to be cut out entirely, or just mentioned in passing. This should give you an idea of how selective this process is going to be.

Let me be brutally honest, if: a) I have never roleplayed with you, b) your character has not obviously and aggressively been a part of the rp, c) your character is new to me (aka used after my absence, which started a considerably long time ago), DO NOT EXPECT TO GET A CHAPTER. Yes, it's a tad unfair, but you know what? I'm the one writing this thing. :I Think what you want of me, but I'm not going out of my way to include characters that I don't know well.

That being said, let me outline this a bit more clearly:

MAIN CHARACTERS: These are the characters who are getting a whole chapter to themselves. Obviously, they have to be absolutely central to the plot. I don't have a definitive number yet of how many chapters there will be, but here are the people that PROBABLY are in this category:

-Arash
-Ilaria
-Piter
-Dragan
-Andrej
-Cosim
-Scott
-Franze

DON'T FREAK OUT IF YOU DON'T SEE "SO-AND-SO" HERE. This list is not definitive, and there are still a lot of 'maybe's. At the same time, don't be offended (or do, idk, you can think of me as a total bitch, I'm still not adding anyone I don't feel belongs) if your character doesn't make the list, because there are still...

SIDE CHARACTERS: Anyone else, basically. (Not everyone will make it into this category, either, just fyi.) These characters won't get their own chapter, but may be described or mentioned briefly. If they have a lot to do with one of the main characters, expect them to show up somewhere! For example, Gomel is important to Piter's story, so obviously, she'll be making many, many cameos.

Please bear with me on all this, it's not fun or easy for me to cut people out, by any means. But...I gotta draw a line somewhere if I want to realistically write this. xD

5. THE PLOT
Okay, this is the part I will need help with. So, obviously, the basic story will be kept:

a. society has collapsed
b. what's left of humanity has gathered to live in one central city dubbed 'Pangaea II'
c. the mafia runs things
d. the government is in hiding
e. there is a revolutionary movement
f. being a neutral sucks

Etc. I'm thinking what I want to do is have the ball be the climax of the story, and spend most of the beginning introducing the idea of Pangaea II. Er...I like explaining things, so expect some dwelling on how Pangaea II came to be.

But I will definitely need help on a detailed outline of the plot and how all of the characters are going to contribute to it. I really like complex/surprising plots, so I'd like to put a lot of thought into this.

6. CREATIVE FREEDOM
I will promise you all right now that I will absolutely NOT take liberties with your characters unless it's absolutely necessary. And even then, I'm likely to discuss it with you privately first. That being said, I guarantee I will have to take liberties with the story at one point or another, most likely with the concept of Pangaea II itself. And I may take dialogue directly out of the rps, or I may not use the rps at all. It depends.

ALSO, YOUR CHARACTER HAS A HIGH RISK OF DYING WHILE IN MY CLUTCHES.

I wrote a story before with about fifteen main characters, and three of them survived. These are not good odds. Don't be shocked, especially in the setting this is taking place in, if people die. Just a fair warning.

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That's all I can come up with for now, but what do you guys think? We have such a fantastic host of characters on our hands here, and a killer story; it's a bit sudden, but I really want to do this!

[EDIT] Oh, and if you don't feel comfortable with me using your character, please please PLEASE be honest and say so before I start developing the story!! I will not be offended at all; I'd like everyone to be straightforward. B)


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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:10 pm

Well now I'll just have to see you at tegs unless I decide to miraculously join that school rp.

< u > I wouldn't mind helping out. Looks interesting enough to me, and I could care less about anyone I have dying so I'm cool with that. :'Ib

Though I am confused by "cinderella" plot. Other than that it makes sense.
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:29 pm

Oh no, I'll be checking in here still, I just won't be rping, so no worries. XD

Cool deal~ I really want to use Scott to focus on the business side of the mafia, you know? Concerning luxury street and all that jazz. B)

As for the Cinderella thing, it was just a random idea, really. Idk how to put it other than that it's really common to do Cinderella plot spin-offs, and I've always been interested in doing my own take. XD I'm going to be throwing a lot of ideas out, so bear with me, lol
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:35 pm

FFFF good. < u >

Go for it. xD

Aaaah, I see. That makes sense I suppose. xD Good luck with all those ideas. I'm too lazy to get anywhere. :I
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:46 pm

Ohoho. I'd be honored if Cala could be a main characterrr. ; 3 ;

And baw, we no have a godfather no moar. Come back one dayyy? ): BUT THAT'S NOT IMPORTANT.

I too am a bit confused with the Cinderella plot thing. Maybe a twisted version could fit, but other then that, it seems a bit out of place. This is afterall depressing enough an RP to make a real person feel depressed.

I dare mention Jiao or Jeremy as side characters of sorts, maybe even main characters, but that's me getting carried away seeing as they haven't played much of a part yet, beside Jiao joining the Jugoslavia cause and Jeremy's EXCESSIVE DEPRESSION. And if you ever do mention the Brandenburg family---- /shot.

In any case, I would think some dramatic death would take place at the ball, in which the head honcho is knocked off his/her throne, most likely by Arash and the revolution. This would make the current plot move quicker and get the revolution somewhere. With this vital pillar knocked over, the mafia and government would be without their main boss/funder, thus causing chaos.

As for the rest, that is still to be written. CAN'T WAIT. ; AAA ;


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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:48 pm

I have no problem with this at all B) I leave them in your über-capable hands XD Can't wait to see it! And the ball is the apex? That is awesome B)

And pfffff I thrive on writing depressing drama XD but I understand how it's sometimes too much lol
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:55 pm

@Cater: lol, don't take the Cinderella thing too seriously, I just like throwing out ideas. But if I were to incorperate it, it would be extremely out-of-the-way: the kind of thing where it's just barely hinted at, then you look back after the end and realize, "Oh! It's like Cinderella!" Verrrrry subtle. XD

And, sorry (this hurts), but I'm gonna have to say that Jiao and Jeremy (even though I love 'em), will be side characters. Remember: I left very soon after you started using the two of them. XD;; And, neither of them were here for the ball event. Cala, though? Definitely a main. B)

[EDIT] Oh shit, my bad, I misread 'side' as 'main' in your comment. XD Sorry, I'm on my phone atm. But yes, they will be side characters somewhere, probably.[/EDIT]

And yesssss, there will be lots of deaths. I like to have some dramatic ones, but mostly casual deaths are my style. Some people will die suddenly, for sure. (I am obsessed with getting death scenes perfect, hurr) But yes, I'm thinking some big bad will go down at the ball, HOWEVER, I like to keep open endings, so I will definitely not close off with things in certain favor of either the revolution or the mafia.

I'm really excited for this! XD

@gyaru: Cool deal~ I will do Vienna and Transi justice. B) Both of them are likely to die, though, derp.

I know, right? Same here, I swear to god. I am kind of shocked with myself, actually. But I guess for rping it's different for me. XD
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:04 pm

That...is a really cool idea for a story. :l I'd buy it. I'd buy it several times over. Forever. /shot

Aw, I know how dystopia stories can get you down. I just wish I knew how to incorporate my OC's into the story better instead of just hanging on the sidelines, or starting a new thread. I start too many threads. orz Poor Faraz is without a baba now. BACK TO THE STREET WITH HIM THEN.

But in all honestly, I don't know if I can keep this up either. I seem to be more suited to the school RP. Will you still be active on the Academy forum?

Good luck with the book!
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:19 pm

And this is the part where it gets very awkward because a person who you barely talk to will act like they knew you well... /bus

You shall be missed, elusive Plum. XD

The idea of a novel is just- pretty effing amazing.

I somewhat regret not getting into the RP sooner, and now that it's gotten farther along I think I'm cursed to obscurity when it comes to plot points. Maybe someday I can do something of relevance here. In my own opinion, I'm not cool enough for your novel XD

But good luck to ya! YOU HAVE THE BLESSING OF A PAN. FEEL HAPPY.

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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:37 pm

@panic: Heheh, I'm really glad. ; v ; Honestly it's a little scary to propose an idea like this. XD

lol Oh god I know exactly what you mean. If I write a new thread and no one replies, I feel like I've done something terribly wrong. And if someone else starts a new thread and I don't feel like I can reply, I want to apologize. XD

But yes, I will still be attending school regularly. B)

Hurrrg I am still mulling over it, but I might make Faraz a main character. He seems fun to write, and I wanna bring in some variety.

@Pan: pffft, I will miss you all too, but not to worry, I will keep in touch through this novel. And I will still be on Tegs, of course. B)

It's really hard; I want to fit in as many side characters as I can, but it's very difficult when I haven't rped much with the person. If it's acceptable for me to say, I'd rather not write at all than to write something and feel uncomfortable about it. ESPECIALLY using other people's characters. I will still do my best, though! AND THANK YOU, I AM VERY HAPPY. <3
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:38 pm

Sob. This. ;u;

Hmmm..Well, I know the other admin. have been putting the older topics in storage but..I can't find them either. I think when we move them, they tend to go into odd spots instead of the ones intended. :\ We'll try to figure out the problem and drag them bad boys out-/shot

Good luck! C:

Edit: What topics are you looking for in particular?
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:48 pm

@Envy: Thanks, it would be a really big help to be able to take a look at them again. Really, I will probably end up wanting to re-read through of them eventually for reference (more for character research than anything else), but especially the ball event. Actually, it is kind of vital to see those topics again, if possible. Again, thank you! <3
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:54 pm

<33333 AHHHH, Plum, you can do whatever you want with Arash, I am so honoured to have him play a main roll in your story. This seems so great, and I'm really excited to see this. <3 His death scene better be wonderful, because remember Plum, TO DIE A MARTYR IS TO INJECT BLOOD INTO THE VEINS OF SOCIETY.

But, regardless I will be missing you so much on here. ): But if it's been making you sad then I'm glad that you're getting away from it. Lmao, since Kurdistan and Arash are so related to Persia (and Mirza to some extent), what will have happened to them? Like- plot wise, to describe their leaving?

Yesss, so much good luck I give to you. <3
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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:15 pm

@Oppy: I am so looking forward to writing him, and I will certainly do you and my country justice. <3 <3 <3 B) YES I AM USING THAT LINE FOR SURE. He will have the most beautiful martyr death. /single tear salute

Oh man, idek. I thought about this, and I am really not sure what to do about Persia. At all. <:\ Maybe I will do a special post saying how all of my characters died, so that we can get them out of the story.

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PostSubject: Re: WHE the Novel + Resignation Letter   Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:27 pm

I know you will do more than justice. <3 Lmao, I stole that line from Persepolis- fff It might be copywrite if you use it in a novel. Of course I use it all the time in real life, like today in my rant about John Brown. But I guess it was written on some propaganda in Tehran around the revolution. I HAVE SOME MORE DEPRESSING MARTYR QUOTES, IF YOU NEED.

): SOB- Also, I've not made a post on it, but I've decided Arash moved away from P.Gulf (Even though she wasn't an RPable character- She is all out of his picture now.) And I assume if Persia dies the Persian mafia also dies? FFFFUUUU- TIME TO WORK FOR THE TURKS.
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